tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post1815260069448216841..comments2024-03-28T06:03:37.679-04:00Comments on Susan's Poetry: A GhazalSusanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-14394421791112574812016-09-07T02:33:26.706-04:002016-09-07T02:33:26.706-04:00Conquest of a terrible illness is always a struggl...Conquest of a terrible illness is always a struggle, but it can be done, even if one dies of it after all. If we are not afraid to die, we are not afraid to live. Beautiful ghazal!Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-13239433228955114342016-09-01T13:44:52.855-04:002016-09-01T13:44:52.855-04:00Susan what a beautiful write! Amazing!Susan what a beautiful write! Amazing!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-86381533666953849362016-09-01T13:28:20.072-04:002016-09-01T13:28:20.072-04:00This is just incredibly beautiful, Susan!This is just incredibly beautiful, Susan!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-69328107068022889862016-09-01T02:28:57.624-04:002016-09-01T02:28:57.624-04:00Breathtaking... Let life flow, let life flow; hope...Breathtaking... Let life flow, let life flow; hope she picks shiny coins of sunshine!<br />Beautiful...Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-91360779728387426112016-08-31T23:50:10.274-04:002016-08-31T23:50:10.274-04:00What a beautiful way to express a long friendship....What a beautiful way to express a long friendship. Excellent use of this tricky form. You are both conquerors.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-44258385393529237902016-08-31T22:11:58.529-04:002016-08-31T22:11:58.529-04:00I have just read something by Frederick Forsyth th...I have just read something by Frederick Forsyth that you might relate to...I know I do<br /><br />A writer lives half his life inside his own head..Behind his mask the writer is always watching, observing behaviour.He has an absolute need for extensive solitude and the permanent detachment from what Malraux called " the human condition" can explain why a writer can never really enter in...A writer must be a loner and thus always an outsider.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-6811698957913201202016-08-31T20:03:28.297-04:002016-08-31T20:03:28.297-04:00My of my daughters went through something similar ...My of my daughters went through something similar two years ago and how she too has grasped onto life with a firm grip and making the most of it. What an inspirational post this is.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-87291160997309530202016-08-31T17:34:35.415-04:002016-08-31T17:34:35.415-04:00you are both conquerors, the one ailing and walkin...you are both conquerors, the one ailing and walking as well the poet<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-63336522428819060112016-08-31T16:38:01.432-04:002016-08-31T16:38:01.432-04:00This is breath taking. Thank you This is breath taking. Thank you Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-42232237191670679912016-08-31T13:26:59.185-04:002016-08-31T13:26:59.185-04:00Oh Susan, this is soo beautiful ❤ its very heart s...Oh Susan, this is soo beautiful ❤ its very heart stirring.. her struggle and her triumph ❤ Beautifully put.<br /><br /><br />Lots of love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-7307346698986082262016-08-31T12:39:57.508-04:002016-08-31T12:39:57.508-04:00This is so carefully crafted. I can't profess ...This is so carefully crafted. I can't profess to understanding the form but there is a strength..quiet like a beautiful web - connecting you and your friend.. A respectful support and connection which feels very tender and present. Writing feels as important as climbing. A journey taken together in many ways perhaps.. Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-70435505126706639582016-08-31T12:39:29.431-04:002016-08-31T12:39:29.431-04:00Such a wonderful poem, with a real meaning, to con...Such a wonderful poem, with a real meaning, to conquest; your friend is an inspiration.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-69305656892737422862016-08-31T12:38:22.696-04:002016-08-31T12:38:22.696-04:00It almost seems as if you are denigrating your wri...It almost seems as if you are denigrating your writing. Are you? Oh, I hope not!Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-88248832664764320922016-08-31T12:02:26.386-04:002016-08-31T12:02:26.386-04:00One of my new favourites of yours, my friend. I se...One of my new favourites of yours, my friend. I see your valiant friend making her bright journey through the canyon, see the small spider leaping for home, see you on your porch, me here.............. each making the journey we were born to make.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-64466278150854524732016-08-31T10:09:49.821-04:002016-08-31T10:09:49.821-04:00Whatever is happening around us are all dear to ou...Whatever is happening around us are all dear to our heart. They are relevant and endearing that merit a write-up to record and save for posterity. Certainly Susan!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-68675316478855244632016-08-31T10:08:57.099-04:002016-08-31T10:08:57.099-04:00deeply touching and inspiring...a beautiful Ghazal...deeply touching and inspiring...a beautiful Ghazal Susan...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-90412118248408913152016-08-31T09:43:30.694-04:002016-08-31T09:43:30.694-04:00Love what you've done with this poem..the stru...Love what you've done with this poem..the struggle around you and the repetition of the phrase...creates something very powerful. Ghazal is one of my favourite forms...attempted it a few times, always a challenge to write. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-32093683645958625242016-08-31T06:25:03.746-04:002016-08-31T06:25:03.746-04:00This is just inspirational stuff. Hope we all get ...This is just inspirational stuff. Hope we all get strength to conquer like your friend :) Samyuktha Semi Jayaprakashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03879275723002707278noreply@blogger.com