tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post283426385933785180..comments2024-03-28T06:03:37.679-04:00Comments on Susan's Poetry: In the StreamSusanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-26574009142677618222014-05-25T12:44:26.844-04:002014-05-25T12:44:26.844-04:00Ick, slime! YOU jump, I'll stay here! Seriousl...Ick, slime! YOU jump, I'll stay here! Seriously, this was a lot of fun to read.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-41014001894740372502014-05-25T10:53:12.677-04:002014-05-25T10:53:12.677-04:00You took me to a child hood summer again.
Beaut...You took me to a child hood summer again. <br /><br />BeautifulGailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-30739943822164886132014-05-25T10:22:14.502-04:002014-05-25T10:22:14.502-04:00"Swim-Splash", I love that bit there."Swim-Splash", I love that bit there. Charleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07983825702353264957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-36408289955543652232014-05-25T06:32:45.201-04:002014-05-25T06:32:45.201-04:00I love the pairing of words - nibble-kiss, swim-sp...I love the pairing of words - nibble-kiss, swim-splash ~ Looks like tad poles are having loads of fun, like us ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-78602149944880201612014-05-25T01:37:11.269-04:002014-05-25T01:37:11.269-04:00As I listened to the Bengali song rendering Rabind...As I listened to the Bengali song rendering Rabindranath Tagore's 'Stream of Life' / 'Pran' (in Bengali) I really was overjoyed..and your beautiful poem traces that connection we all have with each other...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-76483100558445887012014-05-24T20:51:35.238-04:002014-05-24T20:51:35.238-04:00This is a splendid poem. Why do I like it so much...This is a splendid poem. Why do I like it so much? … dimpled pond, nibble-kiss, as if one of us… It is a warm embrace, a vision I don't want to let go. Loved it.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-84988167368902882932014-05-24T19:52:45.387-04:002014-05-24T19:52:45.387-04:00The friend indeed, your round brown pond. Every th...The friend indeed, your round brown pond. Every thing was friendly, even the tad poles in their own way. I.felt welcome. The commas were friends too for reading aloud. <br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-662526302737182002014-05-24T16:51:20.685-04:002014-05-24T16:51:20.685-04:00This is an excellent poem. Not a word out of place...This is an excellent poem. Not a word out of place or off-beat. Great sound throughout. I also really enjoyed your line breaks and spacing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-38410479232205375022014-05-24T16:38:01.663-04:002014-05-24T16:38:01.663-04:00To swim with tadpoles.. I love that thought... and...To swim with tadpoles.. I love that thought... and such nice combination of words here..water-dust and swim-splash.. wonderful and descriptive..brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-16325052469495795942014-05-24T15:42:57.138-04:002014-05-24T15:42:57.138-04:00A reading of this poem provides a real sensation o...A reading of this poem provides a real sensation of escape, Susan. Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com