tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post4295913809292078407..comments2024-03-29T03:00:15.690-04:00Comments on Susan's Poetry: ReveilleSusanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-84480566944002421712013-07-01T05:43:22.281-04:002013-07-01T05:43:22.281-04:00Oh, I get this. Oh, I get this. LaTonya Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17837979981517423142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-78307376633717046662013-06-30T21:17:01.146-04:002013-06-30T21:17:01.146-04:00What a fun read, this gave me such a lift today! ...What a fun read, this gave me such a lift today! And I can relate to it especially the early morning reveille and the poems that get away somewhere between the bed and the notepad!! Good one Susan!<a href="http://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2013/06/29/tanka-whirl/" rel="nofollow">Tanka Whirl</a>WabiSabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-80847268044506752292013-06-30T20:45:33.311-04:002013-06-30T20:45:33.311-04:00I loved this!
most mysterious of dream times
of ...I loved this!<br /><br /><br />most mysterious of dream times<br />of where-do-we-go times, of planning poemtimes—lost to memory no matter howfast I lurch to journal or computer<br /><br />So many great lines!Jacqueline Howetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522485407848765933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-6987534360240013522013-06-30T19:17:44.657-04:002013-06-30T19:17:44.657-04:00Grinned at yes-today's coffee and the old cat ...Grinned at yes-today's coffee and the old cat food........oh that tube of toothpaste right where it does not bend. Some great wordplay here and so enjoyable to read.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-56345725840462951122013-06-30T15:18:59.979-04:002013-06-30T15:18:59.979-04:00absolutely wonderful.such an authentic riveting vo...absolutely wonderful.such an authentic riveting voice with such brilliant wordplay and imagery.this was by far, the best read of the day.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-87841002785992193632013-06-30T15:01:09.345-04:002013-06-30T15:01:09.345-04:00Ha, it seems your poem has resonated with a few. ...Ha, it seems your poem has resonated with a few. I have mixed feelings. Some days if I would not force words out, there would be no words. I guess I would rather have the words to go through later and decide 'keep' or 'toss.' I loved 'yes-today's coffee.' (Ha, but I usually toss my old stuff!)Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-87239809491398893612013-06-30T14:28:39.971-04:002013-06-30T14:28:39.971-04:00I too know this--especially now for me--and I love...I too know this--especially now for me--and I loved forcing words out like toothpaste--I need a vacation!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-82111675158141346162013-06-30T14:15:52.320-04:002013-06-30T14:15:52.320-04:00yes-todays coffee...ha...some fun word play in thi...yes-todays coffee...ha...some fun word play in this susan...my body wakes by 6 every morning...and each day i force words like toothpaste for sure...even on days i dont feel it..a morning discipline as much as vacating...or maybe the same...ha Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-88643359054445508702013-06-30T13:48:56.279-04:002013-06-30T13:48:56.279-04:00I'm with you on this. The forcing of words out...I'm with you on this. The forcing of words out like toothpaste is really getting to me. I think it's time for a break. Enjoy your sunny Sunday.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com