tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post5319085489604460055..comments2024-03-28T21:06:33.877-04:00Comments on Susan's Poetry: Empower Grief: a prayerSusanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-89600361369082168222017-12-11T15:40:44.529-05:002017-12-11T15:40:44.529-05:00The last stanza is a chant to action--powerful and...The last stanza is a chant to action--powerful and full of meaning. Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-20080492231327861542017-12-11T13:11:40.773-05:002017-12-11T13:11:40.773-05:00Perfection. I loved every minute of it. Perfection. I loved every minute of it. colleen Looseleafnoteshttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-35222991008410497422017-12-11T10:06:40.627-05:002017-12-11T10:06:40.627-05:00An outstanding poem, among many at Poets United. ...An outstanding poem, among many at Poets United. One of my favs.annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-38858817197794110442017-12-11T05:28:47.328-05:002017-12-11T05:28:47.328-05:00Singing through to this is hard, hard work, friend...Singing through to this is hard, hard work, friend. Not singing through to this is burning us alive. Thanks.Brendanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03983584155125369291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-8018398013544633722017-12-11T03:44:10.922-05:002017-12-11T03:44:10.922-05:00I like such depth to delve into in your poem. Most...I like such depth to delve into in your poem. Most enjoyableJulianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-89713427795064011432017-12-11T02:10:49.571-05:002017-12-11T02:10:49.571-05:00"earth’s whale-like yearning."...I don&#..."earth’s whale-like yearning."...I don't think I'll ever forget the line. <br />How pleasure and pain are two sides of the same coin!<br />Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-81945748742209466132017-12-11T01:00:23.570-05:002017-12-11T01:00:23.570-05:00We can't avoid natural disasters but being suc...We can't avoid natural disasters but being such a foolish race we create too many of our own as well. Just as the troubles in the middle east are slowly coming under control we find someone is stirring the pot again in Jerusalem!Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-56032466123287411962017-12-10T21:57:16.941-05:002017-12-10T21:57:16.941-05:00Oh that snow would smother fire...and new life wou...Oh that snow would smother fire...and new life would be discovered beneath the flames!<br /><br />Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-25536272688224260112017-12-10T21:15:11.773-05:002017-12-10T21:15:11.773-05:00I thought of the fires out west and the snow on th...I thought of the fires out west and the snow on the east. So much going on in the world.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-87664808687286958672017-12-10T20:36:04.588-05:002017-12-10T20:36:04.588-05:00This is beautiful, Susan.This is beautiful, Susan.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-15358041103821096422017-12-10T20:23:33.820-05:002017-12-10T20:23:33.820-05:00assert grief's power to rule.. wow.. am going ...assert grief's power to rule.. wow.. am going to be stuck with that in my head for a long time.. what happens after yearning smothers the fire .. what is left?Thotpurgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09729170517164200003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-85374447811862993652017-12-10T20:14:22.324-05:002017-12-10T20:14:22.324-05:00
Do whales yearn? One might believe so, listening...<br />Do whales yearn? One might believe so, listening to their conversations!indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-47274742115845272492017-12-10T19:19:49.991-05:002017-12-10T19:19:49.991-05:00An interesting thesis to present "hope" ...An interesting thesis to present "hope" <br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-53853069932054085542017-12-10T17:57:21.810-05:002017-12-10T17:57:21.810-05:00A layered piece, that gives pause. Birth is painf...A layered piece, that gives pause. Birth is painful ... but there is no life without it. Brilliant writing!Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-27601271513464732112017-12-10T12:15:46.307-05:002017-12-10T12:15:46.307-05:00I hear - I actually FEEL) "earth's whale-...I hear - I actually FEEL) "earth's whale-like yearning." What a beautiful phrase, Susan. I feel the pain of the knife used to guide forth new birth. Must be what we are experiencing right now. We live in hope.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.com