tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post5610414378407230056..comments2024-03-28T21:06:33.877-04:00Comments on Susan's Poetry: Another StorySusanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-62194966052398580882013-08-29T11:25:39.765-04:002013-08-29T11:25:39.765-04:00I think we each have a story we can fill in these ...I think we each have a story we can fill in these blanks with. Thank you for visiting, Justin!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-64365227831277109512013-08-29T11:24:57.455-04:002013-08-29T11:24:57.455-04:00I shall keep the back story a secret, as I believe...I shall keep the back story a secret, as I believe we can each supply our own!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-44966858742763305642013-08-29T11:24:13.258-04:002013-08-29T11:24:13.258-04:00Thanks, Sumana!Thanks, Sumana!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-21117098662544978722013-08-26T09:42:50.511-04:002013-08-26T09:42:50.511-04:00I love the questions this piece has raised within ...I love the questions this piece has raised within me. I would rather not spoil the mystery and leave myself pondering for days as to what this little poem refers. Very well done, and thank you for a much needed riddle:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13049080209056013300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-73450435029010555062013-08-25T23:58:40.142-04:002013-08-25T23:58:40.142-04:00thats a gripping tale.I know the type you refer to...thats a gripping tale.I know the type you refer to.fascinatingly put.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-82364899515191025582013-08-25T14:20:38.116-04:002013-08-25T14:20:38.116-04:00Such a string write, makes me wonder at the back s...Such a string write, makes me wonder at the back story.....I especially love the idea of the friends climbing over the wall to save the person. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-18778007234054506312013-08-25T13:50:56.546-04:002013-08-25T13:50:56.546-04:00Keeping the dream alive ...Keeping the dream alive ...Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-78745799088622150022013-08-25T13:50:29.695-04:002013-08-25T13:50:29.695-04:00That is definitely here, thank you for noting it!That is definitely here, thank you for noting it!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-30419807976389815502013-08-25T13:50:01.345-04:002013-08-25T13:50:01.345-04:00AH, Kim! Thanks for the prompt, "Cry out.&qu...AH, Kim! Thanks for the prompt, "Cry out."Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-60708284888360293212013-08-25T13:49:23.016-04:002013-08-25T13:49:23.016-04:00you are always welcome here, Brian. I really like...you are always welcome here, Brian. I really liked the ways you saw to interpret the poem.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-33025006244409271162013-08-25T13:48:19.193-04:002013-08-25T13:48:19.193-04:00Thank you, Mary.Thank you, Mary.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-16484810388054191492013-08-25T13:47:53.596-04:002013-08-25T13:47:53.596-04:00Thank you, Kay.Thank you, Kay.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-25865664823373423182013-08-25T12:02:59.068-04:002013-08-25T12:02:59.068-04:00beautiful poem and I like its structure alsobeautiful poem and I like its structure alsoVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-14276708440182321702013-08-25T11:46:16.974-04:002013-08-25T11:46:16.974-04:00a poignant picture of a detached person crossing t...a poignant picture of a detached person crossing the bar......Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-25104348995969712882013-08-25T08:13:06.995-04:002013-08-25T08:13:06.995-04:00Continued appreciation of your poem today, Susan! ...Continued appreciation of your poem today, Susan! I really think it would be nice to envision that one would have friends who would climb over walls to free a person. Those would be special friends.....really!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-39733594279659327222013-08-25T08:07:28.949-04:002013-08-25T08:07:28.949-04:00hiya...happy sunday susan...hiya...happy sunday susan...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-46053699335156228912013-08-25T04:04:17.119-04:002013-08-25T04:04:17.119-04:00I imagined an older person who has reached a point...I imagined an older person who has reached a point in life when he/she may appear to be physically needy. But mentally, this person has a wealth of grand memories of an active life. A beautifully paced, thoughtful poem.Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-83600617339165440512013-08-22T09:30:03.970-04:002013-08-22T09:30:03.970-04:00Susan~
Fascinating. The detached observer. The imp...Susan~<br />Fascinating. The detached observer. The impressions others have of her/him. Adoration without full understanding. Assumptions of intellect and spirituality. SO many facets to this piece. So much emotion, and in less conventional ways, desire. And the last lines of rescue are a delightful way to end.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-44761111469321173692013-08-22T08:20:14.109-04:002013-08-22T08:20:14.109-04:00this is def fascinating susan...makes me wonder at...this is def fascinating susan...makes me wonder at the story....i am envisioning either and elderly who has lost the ability to speak or someone that has finally awaking one syllable....seeing their heart in this, enjoying their lives...weaving the rescue stories.....really an intriguing story....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-69189410430745133352013-08-21T21:40:35.814-04:002013-08-21T21:40:35.814-04:00This is such a depthful poem of humanness, Susan, ...This is such a depthful poem of humanness, Susan, and sometimes it isn't easy being human. I really like the shape of the poem and the way you wove your ideas into the shape.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-33079140388680332382013-08-21T21:14:35.414-04:002013-08-21T21:14:35.414-04:00This is beautiful, Susan, and fascinating—it raise...This is beautiful, Susan, and fascinating—it raises all sorts of questions: who, what, where, when, why? But it is perfect, even without answers.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.com