tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post5889492590713625070..comments2024-03-29T03:00:15.690-04:00Comments on Susan's Poetry: PariahSusanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-63683587014524019742016-12-07T00:28:17.263-05:002016-12-07T00:28:17.263-05:00Great take on the theme, Susan. Stigma does involv...Great take on the theme, Susan. Stigma does involve a lot of talking and gawking, but unfortunately in many cases the prejudice and hate is so great that physical violence is added to the looks and words...<br />Well-penned!Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-88447191546254740042016-12-02T05:04:17.340-05:002016-12-02T05:04:17.340-05:00keep on glowing
the others will eventually
pale i...keep on glowing<br />the others will eventually <br />pale into insignificance and nothingnessrallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-88243701888790866742016-12-02T04:25:39.298-05:002016-12-02T04:25:39.298-05:00You describe a painful and difficult situation, ye...You describe a painful and difficult situation, yes – and I admire how beautifully you have written all the same.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-52945833159339042592016-12-01T21:02:31.218-05:002016-12-01T21:02:31.218-05:00Oh, it is hard to be gawked at and talked about. ...Oh, it is hard to be gawked at and talked about. This poem is painfully realistic, something I think many of us feel at one time or another.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-88472461120814745872016-12-01T07:04:26.148-05:002016-12-01T07:04:26.148-05:00That duckling really caught my emotions.. far bett...That duckling really caught my emotions.. far better to be a thoughtful ducking than superficial swan.. it is sad that the world turns ducklings into pariahs.. Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-84922041314159204252016-12-01T02:47:47.761-05:002016-12-01T02:47:47.761-05:00Someone again has told my tale
because it never se...Someone again has told my tale<br />because it never seems to fail<br />that when I glow others turn pale.<br /><br />Whistles!!❤️ I LOVE the intensity of this ❤️<br /><br /><br />Lots of love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-54761885976484215032016-11-30T20:43:10.857-05:002016-11-30T20:43:10.857-05:00How important it is to be oneself. The worst thing...How important it is to be oneself. The worst thing with childhood is being made to conform until like the ugly duckling you can emerge and be that swan...yourself.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-61938359312311099852016-11-30T18:54:48.789-05:002016-11-30T18:54:48.789-05:00well composed. the weight of scrutiny well composed. the weight of scrutiny Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-14781151831517582282016-11-30T16:59:35.014-05:002016-11-30T16:59:35.014-05:00Ah, the sheath and the blade. Very nice endingAh, the sheath and the blade. Very nice endingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-84368746317167067812016-11-30T14:32:48.421-05:002016-11-30T14:32:48.421-05:00It is difficult being under scrutiny. I have watch...It is difficult being under scrutiny. I have watched my daughter going through that lately. People have no idea how painful their judgments are. So well expressed, Susan.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-90652839347316834652016-11-30T13:21:01.858-05:002016-11-30T13:21:01.858-05:00"Someone again has told my tale
because it ne..."Someone again has told my tale<br />because it never seems to fail<br />that when I glow others turn pale..." Wow!!!- that's how an outcast spirit takes a flight and heals! <br />Intense piece, Susan! Very powerful lines...Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-38185813029734400542016-11-30T08:32:17.150-05:002016-11-30T08:32:17.150-05:00love the examples you've used here...three exq...love the examples you've used here...three exquisite stanzas..really if there's any sin in this world it is to ostracize someone...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-90654788692477569662016-11-30T08:23:11.879-05:002016-11-30T08:23:11.879-05:00Anyone who has ever been a duck, cat or hawk knows...Anyone who has ever been a duck, cat or hawk knows what that feels like...sadly nothing seems to have changed...the gawkers and talkers persist. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com