tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post7359276248116494546..comments2024-03-28T15:21:44.806-04:00Comments on Susan's Poetry: An Ordinary DaySusanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-7542585503773038332017-11-01T08:27:16.816-04:002017-11-01T08:27:16.816-04:00A wonderful poem, Susan. So many of us look at our...A wonderful poem, Susan. So many of us look at our lives as temporal journeys in seas of experience and interaction with other travellers. No wonder we had a such a fine selection of poems this week on this very theme.Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-53657856381242705122017-10-27T06:53:10.783-04:002017-10-27T06:53:10.783-04:00and by holding on
while we rotate with the earth, ...and by holding on<br />while we rotate with the earth, <br />moon and sun<br /><br />To think it is just an ordinary day!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-51660823109984975402017-10-26T20:59:39.365-04:002017-10-26T20:59:39.365-04:00You have described one's journey very well...w...You have described one's journey very well...whether it be a day's journey or a life's journey. And, yes, there is always a bit of clutter along the way!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-75816743814769759482017-10-26T10:00:07.904-04:002017-10-26T10:00:07.904-04:00I love the idea of each day being a journey of unk...I love the idea of each day being a journey of unknown. 'Embrace the clutter and the Dream' - beautiful thought.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-16558105499516638982017-10-26T07:42:27.620-04:002017-10-26T07:42:27.620-04:00Thought provoking Life throws a lot of plates at y...Thought provoking Life throws a lot of plates at you regardless of how earnestly you try to control your personal world.It is just the way it is for some people. I am a person who is constantly trying 'to get on top' of things like Sisyphus.:)rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-47577337576258702312017-10-26T05:03:33.401-04:002017-10-26T05:03:33.401-04:00Pretty hectic day, I must say Susan. Loved the beg...Pretty hectic day, I must say Susan. Loved the beginnings with uncertain endings. I think it’s really true that endings are uncertain.totomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-90300371898329212812017-10-26T00:08:31.558-04:002017-10-26T00:08:31.558-04:00I couldn't agree more specially the embracing ...I couldn't agree more specially the embracing part. Also love that certainty of the beginning and all the lovely images in the lines.Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-21104731200689508252017-10-25T22:52:30.114-04:002017-10-25T22:52:30.114-04:00Rarely do we a have a quiet life with everything o...Rarely do we a have a quiet life with everything ordered and going our way. In retrospect we probably happy that trials and changes have occured to make us understand exactly what life is about. Personally I am glad I have been tested and not everything has turned out right. Not being all that tidy, having some clutter seems just for me!Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-6921271066070536042017-10-25T21:52:27.182-04:002017-10-25T21:52:27.182-04:00I travel with characters by bus, by flying carpet,...I travel with characters by bus, by flying carpet,<br />by streetcars of desire .. love that... I was instantly categorizing everyone around me by modes of transport of course!!! Thotpurgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09729170517164200003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-90193508924881442892017-10-25T18:44:53.603-04:002017-10-25T18:44:53.603-04:00
WOW, Susan, this is a great write! Each day unfo...<br />WOW, Susan, this is a great write! Each day unfolds with clutter and dreams, angst and joy, boredom and excitement. What a ride!indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-84023980188496679242017-10-25T17:03:03.886-04:002017-10-25T17:03:03.886-04:00A wonderful journey of a creator Loved the last li...A wonderful journey of a creator Loved the last lines so deep and meaningful<br />"when I could let go and live them, collaborate, and,<br />in between, embrace the clutter and the dream."<br />A fantastic poem Loved itMarjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-24312513930625848022017-10-25T15:16:56.808-04:002017-10-25T15:16:56.808-04:00Susan
Life with all its facets and clutter is the ...Susan<br />Life with all its facets and clutter is the journey lived through our individual experiences...many journeys form a lifetime...Eileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-86336623647394399082017-10-25T14:04:34.401-04:002017-10-25T14:04:34.401-04:00Sigh. This is gorgeous. I adore "embrace the ...Sigh. This is gorgeous. I adore "embrace the clutter and the dream". Sigh. I also like the idea of each day being a journey, stepping stone in the longer journey we are making.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-35734785327176216312017-10-25T13:45:50.873-04:002017-10-25T13:45:50.873-04:00Oh, I embrace the clutter daily (the dream, not so...Oh, I embrace the clutter daily (the dream, not so much). Fine write!Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-18183615044573270372017-10-25T13:08:53.650-04:002017-10-25T13:08:53.650-04:00The complexities of life beautifully expressed. As...The complexities of life beautifully expressed. As you say better just enjoy the ride than try to find out what's actually happening. It's mind bogglingNamrathahttp://www.namysaysso.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-56848535508110228302017-10-25T12:41:03.105-04:002017-10-25T12:41:03.105-04:00These lines:
How dizzying to follow the plots, to...These lines:<br /><br />How dizzying to follow the plots, to find what they mean—<br />or to try and write the chapters, predict and control—<br /><br />touched me because that's how a life's journey is. thanks Susan for this nice poem.Nicholas https://www.blogger.com/profile/05252355730748268069noreply@blogger.com