tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post8701224385829278191..comments2024-03-28T21:06:33.877-04:00Comments on Susan's Poetry: In Dark With DragonSusanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-5220237015973799762016-03-01T14:27:20.792-05:002016-03-01T14:27:20.792-05:00Interesting, you made your theme speak :) Lovely!
...Interesting, you made your theme speak :) Lovely!<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-25514387900338039292016-02-29T19:11:44.751-05:002016-02-29T19:11:44.751-05:00Love this - which, for me, felt very much like an ...Love this - which, for me, felt very much like an ode to contemplation and introspection. That, I believe, is the key to the "treasure". A beautiful, insightful, eloquent piece. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-46930292484978260662016-02-29T08:02:35.012-05:002016-02-29T08:02:35.012-05:00i smiled when i read "password forgotten and ...i smiled when i read <i>"password forgotten and scared.."</i><br />otherwise i think it is about a serious subject, how much we know about ourselves now, and how we may not know about ourselves in the future.<br />my weird opinion, must be the dragon in the illustration. :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-34203321774264833522016-02-29T04:20:29.305-05:002016-02-29T04:20:29.305-05:00 I face myself to
find myself and take
steps furth... I face myself to<br />find myself and take<br />steps further into<br />the mystery of me....<br /><br />what a way to unfold oneself...<br />Great writing herePThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09777057015005418560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-47480558339816668442016-02-29T00:34:00.950-05:002016-02-29T00:34:00.950-05:00Anything with dragons, locked places, and mysterie...Anything with dragons, locked places, and mysteries wins me over immediately...but THIS: "I face myself to<br />find myself"---that is so exquisitely profoundly stated. Love it :-)C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-66066068589831130472016-02-28T17:40:51.703-05:002016-02-28T17:40:51.703-05:00I used to liken our minds to floppy disks, sometim...I used to liken our minds to floppy disks, sometimes there's not much space anymore but we still keep more important files (secrets / memories). <br /><br />People we meet can judge us but unless they know our "passwords" they can only assume things.<br /><br />Have a nice day, Susantotomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-77120933676029345712016-02-28T17:01:41.864-05:002016-02-28T17:01:41.864-05:00I suppose the keys and passwords appear when we le...I suppose the keys and passwords appear when we least expect them. It's a great blessing to have that secret cave.<br />Steve K.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-51570759246002456512016-02-28T13:52:43.854-05:002016-02-28T13:52:43.854-05:00Look at me.....the journey to oneself to find ones...Look at me.....the journey to oneself to find oneself...the last stanza is beyond amazing. Knowing how dragons guard their gold, I found this self dragon guarding the gold within even more compelling.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-54400376570442808032016-02-28T12:14:28.672-05:002016-02-28T12:14:28.672-05:00"Look
at me transform from
human to dragon
to..."Look<br />at me transform from<br />human to dragon<br />to guard my own stuff." Often the secrets are twisted. As they say, life is nothing but tricks...<br />This goes to prove the old adage!! The concluding lines are impeccable! Loved this, Susan.Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-36047091832714746972016-02-28T12:04:32.803-05:002016-02-28T12:04:32.803-05:00This is exquisite. I love the finding of the Self...This is exquisite. I love the finding of the Self, the watching(reading),the selfdiscovery of your own mystery. The last stanza is wonderful.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-1321619055315044462016-02-28T10:51:39.639-05:002016-02-28T10:51:39.639-05:00Wow, I love your imaginative transformation to dra...Wow, I love your imaginative transformation to dragon, Susan. Such a courage to admit to yourself, to see the whole 'you'..., and I adore the last stanza especially. humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-43736787127758856352016-02-28T08:50:19.137-05:002016-02-28T08:50:19.137-05:00I love the inner-dance that takes places within th...I love the inner-dance that takes places within these lines. The way the speaker speaks to self and about self... The whole poem makes me think of mirrors.Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-3524292542702684652016-02-28T08:35:34.525-05:002016-02-28T08:35:34.525-05:00memories are more precious than gold and the heart...memories are more precious than gold and the heart is indeed the secret cave we guard.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-49208716665180199052016-02-28T06:50:46.793-05:002016-02-28T06:50:46.793-05:00Such an imaginative piece, which reads as a person...Such an imaginative piece, which reads as a personal testament.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-41777557925498207782016-02-28T05:43:39.887-05:002016-02-28T05:43:39.887-05:00A beautiful paradox – resolved.A beautiful paradox – resolved.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-2776069089195330492016-02-28T04:02:17.149-05:002016-02-28T04:02:17.149-05:00So much to love in this epic poem - I am the guard...So much to love in this epic poem - I am the guard of my treasure - a wonderful thing to have and to strive for..there is a peace in this..a wonder and a knowing..like talking to yourself in the very best way..and who can resist a dragon..Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-85768230000296267552016-02-28T03:56:13.432-05:002016-02-28T03:56:13.432-05:00We do lock things deep inside us..forget the passw...We do lock things deep inside us..forget the password as it were..loved the analogy.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-65272977965138450872016-02-28T03:48:38.183-05:002016-02-28T03:48:38.183-05:00"I face myself to / find myself" this is..."I face myself to / find myself" this is my favorite journey too... Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-39125134476957965362016-02-28T03:45:52.357-05:002016-02-28T03:45:52.357-05:00Goodness, there is such a wonderful and magical qu...Goodness, there is such a wonderful and magical quality to this poem :D the images of memories which are guarded like gold are precious and exquisite :D Beautifully penned!<br /><br />Lots of love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-42011782289097420452016-02-28T03:39:07.611-05:002016-02-28T03:39:07.611-05:00The more worldly we become the less we are ourselv...The more worldly we become the less we are ourselves. How important it is to find this place you write of in order to really be ourselves and not slaves to other's whims and the broken world.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-65250666291709737102016-02-28T03:01:44.036-05:002016-02-28T03:01:44.036-05:00I really like the way we have those words inside.....I really like the way we have those words inside... Maybe we need those keys and passwords.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-11767788923310346162016-02-28T02:59:23.480-05:002016-02-28T02:59:23.480-05:00Very, very nice.Very, very nice.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-84604166835972400172016-02-27T20:02:21.276-05:002016-02-27T20:02:21.276-05:00I like the mystery in this poem, the searching and...I like the mystery in this poem, the searching and the finding the place where the Great Spirit waits to embrace. I wanted to enter in to this poem so that I could feel the love even more.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-24246742164806010772016-02-27T15:08:50.614-05:002016-02-27T15:08:50.614-05:00Loved this even more today, the more so as I am cu...Loved this even more today, the more so as I am currently reading Elizabeth Gilbert's latest on writing, which is all about unearthing the inner treasures....and mystery. Synchronicity! Love the closing lines especially!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-34360013570307978502016-02-26T11:25:04.455-05:002016-02-26T11:25:04.455-05:00This is wonderful, my friend. I love that we seek ...This is wonderful, my friend. I love that we seek the magic that opens the gate....the key we ourselves have hidden. Love the closing stanza especially. I see a Path of Pendleton book of poems coming out of your time there. You are diving deeply.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com