tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post972485633098602899..comments2024-03-29T03:00:15.690-04:00Comments on Susan's Poetry: Pause for DreamingSusanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-82858261906542647222020-06-16T20:19:11.788-04:002020-06-16T20:19:11.788-04:00I love the recognition of "the sky's the ...I love the recognition of "the sky's the limit", a perfect dream image.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-12562132245034188442020-06-15T23:24:01.866-04:002020-06-15T23:24:01.866-04:00"A dream in a dream." I find this a lov..."A dream in a dream." I find this a lovely thought and I love your poem. Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-58550383987946788792020-06-15T21:07:59.860-04:002020-06-15T21:07:59.860-04:00A lovely write and I'm so pleased you rounded ...A lovely write and I'm so pleased you rounded it off by coming back to that regal stare. Loved it!Vivian Zemshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09588008375525403964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-52167811876495325442020-06-14T15:37:28.789-04:002020-06-14T15:37:28.789-04:00Beautiful, reflective...I once had a buck who came...Beautiful, reflective...I once had a buck who came almost daily to visit. He would stand behind the fence and we would quietly observer each other. Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-10340262263526265402020-06-14T12:38:49.640-04:002020-06-14T12:38:49.640-04:00"A dream in a dream." I am held in his g..."A dream in a dream." I am held in his gaze too. Beautiful, Susan.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-55897370379943209922020-06-14T08:08:20.796-04:002020-06-14T08:08:20.796-04:00Susan, you did so well with your ekphrastic work. ...Susan, you did so well with your ekphrastic work. I also like the, I'll call it "continuing verse", form. I did that between verse transition or continuation one place in one poem. Yours seemed to flow smoothly. <br />Yes, there is a void left where our continuing attempts were destroyed with ISIS furor.<br />We must do our small part, if we find one. That there is a great need is very evident as we see how nature is attempting to adapt to our neglect and destruction. <br />I do lend my name to the Sierra Club and other petitions. <br />..<br />.. Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-17612512047826358882020-06-14T04:01:29.325-04:002020-06-14T04:01:29.325-04:00Stunning imagery - what else can we expect from dr...Stunning imagery - what else can we expect from dreams within dreams.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-58893080838065006402020-06-14T00:27:10.304-04:002020-06-14T00:27:10.304-04:00Wow! So good!!Wow! So good!!Thotpurgenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-70757498308281741892020-06-14T00:17:58.760-04:002020-06-14T00:17:58.760-04:00A unique and beautiful poetic interpretation of th...A unique and beautiful poetic interpretation of the art ....Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-77417183726830207912020-06-13T21:54:50.077-04:002020-06-13T21:54:50.077-04:00A dream in a dream and the message is up to interp...A dream in a dream and the message is up to interpretation. <br />If only we could turn the clock back a bit and right some wrongs.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-45430051402570325292020-06-13T20:10:38.668-04:002020-06-13T20:10:38.668-04:00OoOo, I love dreams within dreams, especially if a...OoOo, I love dreams within dreams, especially if animals or birds are key players, and then trying to plumb the meaning. This is striking.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-19496974021806477892020-06-13T19:37:56.302-04:002020-06-13T19:37:56.302-04:00Beautiful! And that idea of a reverse Noah's a...Beautiful! And that idea of a reverse Noah's ark is compelling. C. Sandlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15616902831506982429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-29958967241844359792020-06-13T15:52:04.062-04:002020-06-13T15:52:04.062-04:00So good! Much, much here, both in language and in ...So good! Much, much here, both in language and in content. I especially liked "This is no Noah’s Ark. Is he asking me / to leave the way we came taking all my people with me? "qbithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08373768695201177514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-456333369930820298.post-52727668609474314002020-06-13T14:05:18.592-04:002020-06-13T14:05:18.592-04:00I love the images and thoughts in this poetic drea...I love the images and thoughts in this poetic dream but that last stanza is pure magic Susan!!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.com