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01 November 2013

Open Door


rain grey
rain blow
rain sun
rainbow?
rain shine
no bow
Posted for Satya Robyn's event: Mindful Writing Day, today: a small stone, a meditative moment, a drop in the bucket of peace.

 Re-posted at Poets United for Poetry Pantry # 174.


Copyright © 2013  S.L.Chast

15 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue Sky11/01/2013 1:05 PM

    I love the "drop in the bucket of peace".

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  2. Brian Miller11/01/2013 9:55 PM

    every rainbow comes with rain....some days though liht is enough...and laying down the bows...and arrows...

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    1. Brian Miller11/03/2013 7:05 AM

      ah that should be light.....smiles
      happy sunday

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  3. Mary11/03/2013 7:33 AM

    Very clever reflection here! Love the final line.

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  4. Anonymous11/03/2013 7:47 AM

    Simple words and great imagery. Impressive. :-)
    -HA

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  5. Anonymous11/03/2013 8:13 AM

    always loving rain blows!

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  6. Geraldine 11/03/2013 12:33 PM

    I love the hope in your words and the rhythm to the lines. :<)

    Thank you for the lovely comment re: Wait for Me! Made my morning.

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  7. Vandana Sharma11/03/2013 1:21 PM

    Different meanings deciphered for one single word!! that so amazing and intelligent.

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  8. Kerry O'Connor11/03/2013 1:36 PM

    Each poetic drop is perfectly timed.

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  9. Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger11/03/2013 3:01 PM

    Lovely!

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  10. Laura11/03/2013 3:04 PM

    Welcome to November… beautifully expressed.

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  11. Gabriella11/03/2013 3:54 PM

    Great play on the words and images we associate with rain Susan!

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  12. Unknown11/03/2013 4:21 PM

    love it!

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  13. Sumana Roy11/04/2013 7:44 AM

    love the play of rain.....

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