Water
"Water, water, every where,
And all the boards did shrink;
Water, water, every where,
Nor any drop to drink."**
And all the boards did shrink;
Water, water, every where,
Nor any drop to drink."**
1
We cupped our hands
for spring water to chill
2
Children splashed
everywhere, knee high, hands free--
puddle, pool, spring,
stream, river, tub and sea
3
Steel pots and pails,
glazed cups and cowboy hats
displaced the coopers
trade so “there’s a hole
in my bucket” lost
its tune to the times
4
Mom and I found blue
glass and bell jars
in the landfill
behind grandmother’s shed,
washed them in the
sink, lined them up on sills
to catch sun—I cannot
go back there alone
5
We love; we wash each
other in showers
the wash basin gone
the way of the wringer,
the clothes lines,
and the garden watering
one bucket after
another then filled
with beans and snap
peas and tomatoes
6
We lavish in each
other’s love, waste daylight,
taste moon tides,
sculpt face masks with petals,
race bicycles, play
scrabble, drink coffee,
gamble candles and
horsepower for love
dancing here,
sleeping there and waking up
at last to hear of
wars and scarcities
7
We sip from plastic
bottles at our campfire
joking
semi-earnestly that we hold the solution
to
scarcity of water in our hands: making,
filling,
shipping, distributing, hoarding
and
profiting by what we take so easily
from
our market-supplied packs—
spring
water, artesian water, distilled water.
8
We
name instances, a game, a fun contest
to name and to be able to judge: the revenge
of
Montezuma in Mexico; the drought in Ethiopia,
Near
and Far East and elsewhere in Africa
and
the Americas, droughts everywhere;
flood-floated
poisons and fracking run-offs;
and
the ancient mariner’s penance, the waste
land's
thunder and the dust bowl's wrath.
9
Who
wins? You ask, pulling yourself from play,
entering
your om shanti shanti shanti, thus
removing
obstacles to peace and understanding,
thus
resolving yourself of my company—still
in
worn blue jeans, red corduroy shirt, bandana,
and
cap, you mix other worldly metaphors
to
pour a libation on mother earth, crumple
your
empty with crackle of lightening, and bury
it
in your army fatigue pack, out of sight and mind
10
I
want to win; I always do—so I crumple mine too,
pull
out my journal, and record by the light of the fire
and
the Light of you that we are the dunghills we make
and cannot rise above their mist, that we have been Job
and now must be able to rise to shovel our way out
along with our neighbors, to bend our words from swords
into plowshares AND pipe lines to . . . oh . . . I don’t know!
To season my thoughts into thunder, I fall back on the green moss,
place my hand on your damp libation; look up to the stars,
breathe and sigh. I want to cry, but I don't.
and cannot rise above their mist, that we have been Job
and now must be able to rise to shovel our way out
along with our neighbors, to bend our words from swords
into plowshares AND pipe lines to . . . oh . . . I don’t know!
To season my thoughts into thunder, I fall back on the green moss,
place my hand on your damp libation; look up to the stars,
breathe and sigh. I want to cry, but I don't.
**from "The Rime of the Ancient Mariner"
by Samuel Taylor Coleridge
Other places
I visited include: The Grapes of Wrath by John
Steinbeck, "The Wasteland" by
T.S. Eliot, "Upon the Burning of our House" by Anne Bradstreet, Lady Windermere's Fan (Act III) by
Oscar Wilde, and the Bible.
Copyright
© 2012 S.L.Chast
Submitted to Apiary
We are this earth's worst parasite and, we have been now for probably 150 years. We've regressed in our care of her, plundered, her riches and left great gaping holes in her wherever we've dug and drilled for her resources. This is so deep on many levels. It begins light of heart and carefree and then gradually descends into life as it is now in all its truth and ugliness of greed. And yet, there is always the hope that before too long mankind will awaken to this destruction of the only home we have.
ReplyDeleteAn epic tale Susan.
I look forward to your visits and comments, Bren.
DeleteWOW! This is one fantastic write, it made me sit up and take notice. You hit upon so much, so accurately, so well..............I so know the feeling, looking at the stars, or nature's beauty, and wanting to cry....but I dont.
ReplyDeleteThank God for poetry, and thank YOU for this one. Wowzers!
Wow back, Thank you for visiting and getting it!
DeleteWater flowing throughout, till the end!
ReplyDeleteYes, little vignette's based on water, long may it flow!
DeleteThis is a very beautiful piece!
ReplyDeleteSo much in one offering! Need a revisit to savor the intricacies of your verses. Wonderful write Susan!
ReplyDeleteHank
You are a generous reader!
DeleteThank you for this! I love poems that stir me and others so emotionally. I love your passion. May many read this and think beyond the surface.
ReplyDeleteThis problem is fed by man veins, and I do mean that literally. I won't go into a long dissertation. I'll save that for my private essays, but in short, crying is one of the best things you can do. It puts water back into the biosphere.
Thank you for letting me know that "Water" moved you!
Deletethis was a mini-epic of sorts.your lines, esp the concluding stanza is precisely the seasoning one needs for new thunders.richly allusive and yet strikingly original.fantastic poem.
ReplyDelete"new thunders" thank you!
DeleteSusan, I just love this. I know I said it before, I was waiting to see the whole thing, and it is just tremendous. Tremendous! So personal and intimate, blossoming into something universal and vastly, hugely important. Please get this published somewhere! I have one idea of a place you might submit, if you're interested. Just great work. Bravo!
ReplyDeletePublishing Advice would be welcome. It's only been 4 months since I started taking myself seriously as a poet (since I retired), and--thanks to this and other blog/workshops--I am beginning to believe I should publish. I am not in a rush, though. I'm taking the dVerse urban challenge this week.
DeleteGreat poem, Susan! I love how it builds upon itself and gets more and more passionate.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful piece about our epic failure to protect the planet that gives us life. Tears rest on my eyelids afraid to fall because there would be no end.
ReplyDeleteYes. It's been a journey for me. I just bought an aluminum water bottle.
DeleteI like the format of this poem..the first line...then the ten lines.
ReplyDeleteI like the water references from the cup to the bowl to the thundering thoughts and tears ~
A lovely share Susan ~
Thank you for noticing the format--you are the first--and also the details. Thank you for continuing to read my poems!
DeleteSusan,
ReplyDeleteSo many reflections of insight! Wow, it was touching,really moving!
Bravo!
Thank you, Ella, for letting me know you were moved by "Water."
DeleteNumber 4 is my favorite.
ReplyDeleteLandfills are dangerous. (I know you mean the details.) Thank you.
DeleteMissed the other but glad you put them all together, enjoyed the journey
ReplyDeletegood, thanks
DeleteAn interesting swim in troubled waters for me: water in plastic bottles cannot save the world, only destroy the planet. But somehow I don't think that's what you were saying!
ReplyDeletehttp://www.mnn.com/food/healthy-eating/stories/5-reasons-not-to-drink-bottled-water
http://www.care2.com/causes/you-are-what-you-eat-and-youre-eating-trash.html
No. Just bought an aluminum bottle. I thought the crumpling of the bottles would bring that across. Thank you for visiting!
DeleteI love the ambition of this piece of writing, and appreciate having seen your process at work and now the final product. Your approach reminds me of Steven's "13 Ways of Looking at a Blackbird", which is one of my very favourite poems.
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Of Course! "13 ways" How could I have forgotten! I thought to follow this poem with a similar approach to the other elements. I'll be playing with it a little to see.
DeleteA very difficult format, handled with apparent ease. Well done!
ReplyDeleteAnd oh, so right, about the earth, the water, the weather...Bravo!
K
Thank you, Kay!
DeleteThis is a wonderful extrapolation from the simple theme of water. The pace of its growth and expansion from brief stanzas into richly detailed description and reflection is skilfully handled. This is a really impressive piece.
ReplyDeleteThank you for this comment and your visit, Mr. Jones.
DeleteWow...you touched on so much here. Definitely a poem to read again. Beautiful write!
ReplyDeleteThank you. You are welcome anytime!
DeleteI love the last two lines of the Number 8 stanza... You covered the subject with layer upon layer of meaning.
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