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They are conspicuously red and endearing, Susan! Great take!Hank
red is such an evocative color...traveling the whole gambit in its interpretation...interesting you end on gore as it is vivid...
Great words on red.
A beautiful take.. yes, just one crayon.. RS:)
What happens if you lose the red crayon?Scarlet Letters
One color..many shades!!
What a lovely thought--the crayon covering all those wonderful red things. Nice take on the prompt.
I love this color as it is a strong one ~ That last line though, gives me pause as it is a dramatic ending ~
"lips, sunset and gore" -- FANTABULOUS! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT
Beautiful! I loved the second one! <3 As I sometimes draw, feel so connected to the haiku!Beautifully written :)
Awesome lines!
This is very nice haiku for red.
Nicely crafted.
Very nicely done
Right...Just one crayon color..Bt too many meanings it carries!!!
Wonderful and well selected options for the color red. ;-)Eliz
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They are conspicuously red and endearing, Susan! Great take!
ReplyDeleteHank
red is such an evocative color...traveling the whole gambit in its interpretation...interesting you end on gore as it is vivid...
ReplyDeleteGreat words on red.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful take.. yes, just one crayon..
ReplyDeleteRS:)
What happens if you lose the red crayon?
ReplyDeleteScarlet Letters
One color..many shades!!
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely thought--the crayon covering all those wonderful red things. Nice take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteI love this color as it is a strong one ~ That last line though, gives me pause as it is a dramatic ending ~
ReplyDelete"lips, sunset and gore" -- FANTABULOUS! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I loved the second one! <3 As I sometimes draw, feel so connected to the haiku!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written :)
Awesome lines!
ReplyDeleteThis is very nice haiku for red.
ReplyDeleteNicely crafted.
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done
ReplyDeleteRight...
ReplyDeleteJust one crayon color..
Bt too many meanings it carries!!!
Wonderful and well selected options for the color red. ;-)
ReplyDeleteEliz