01 November 2013

Open Door


rain grey
rain blow
rain sun
rainbow?
rain shine
no bow


Posted for Satya Robyn's event: Mindful Writing Day, today: a small stone, a meditative moment, a drop in the bucket of peace.

Re-posted at Poets United for Poetry Pantry # 174.




Copyright © 2013  S.L.Chast





15 comments:

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I love the "drop in the bucket of peace".

Brian Miller said...

every rainbow comes with rain....some days though liht is enough...and laying down the bows...and arrows...

Brian Miller said...

ah that should be light.....smiles
happy sunday

Mary said...

Very clever reflection here! Love the final line.

howanxious said...

Simple words and great imagery. Impressive. :-)
-HA

Sreejit Poole said...

always loving rain blows!

Geraldine said...

I love the hope in your words and the rhythm to the lines. :<)

Thank you for the lovely comment re: Wait for Me! Made my morning.

Vandana Sharma said...

Different meanings deciphered for one single word!! that so amazing and intelligent.

Kerry O'Connor said...

Each poetic drop is perfectly timed.

Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger said...

Lovely!

Laura said...

Welcome to November… beautifully expressed.

Gabriella said...

Great play on the words and images we associate with rain Susan!

Sam Edge said...

love it!

Sumana Roy said...

love the play of rain.....

Susan said...

You are very good!