25 July 2024

The Shepherdess

 

Darron Cummings/AP


 

Open curtains to the usual scene:
apple tree’s thinnest limbs hanging leafless
while others bear fruit.  I can hear the keen
of earth turning to meet our shepherdess.
 
She leans toward people, listens, and talks.
We see she travels slowly every day,
and values each one she meets while she walks.
But how will she react to power’s sway?
 
Her crook will rescue her wandering sheep
and ward off the newest predator’s threats.
Will she remember her power?  Asleep,
it will wake to rip chronic villains’ nets.  
 
Open curtains to unusual scenes
of branches trimmed and ruined land restored.
We’re a work in progress—no time to preen.
The earth turns in hope for new peace accord.


For Mary's prompt Changing Times at What's Going On?


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8 comments:

  1. I love the great picture of Kamela and the well-penned form of your poem! The spirit of optimism comes through strongly. It is such a good feeling to at last have such a trustworthy shepherdess! Love the last line: " The earth turns in hope for new peace accord. " Yes!

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  2. I love this poem, too, especially the last line. So good to have hope..........she is strong! And so warm!

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  3. P.S. Your poem was worth waiting for. Smiles.

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  4. I think we'll know about "power's sway" soon enough! Let's wait and watch...am not as hopeful though, Susan.

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  5. "The earth turns in hope for new peace accord." I love the voice that sings with such enthusiasm and hope. We all desperately wish to live in peace. Peace dwells in positive thoughts and energies only. And I have to agree with what Rajani has already said and so mulling over the line : 'But how will she react to power’s sway?'

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  6. There is hope in your poem - but i don't have hope in politicians - whoever they are !! - Still it was an interesting read and well crafted work.

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  7. I love the metaphor of a "shepherdess," Susan, evoking as it does caring instincts to protect and nurture, if she will "remember her power." The optimism in the poem is contagious! This line from the fisrt stanza sets the tone of anticipation: "I can hear the keen/of earth turning to meet our shepherdess." So well done.

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