12 February 2025

Quenching Thirst



Rising humidity threatens snow,
and everything here reaches upward
as if singing “I’m thirsty” in chorus.
 
Pink haze darkens the sky before noon.
At the feeders, birds crack seeds open and
sit on the dry fountain, turned off ‘til spring.
 
The parking lot spreads out, car hoods ready
for rain or snow, tires patiently waiting
for drivers to weigh down the front seats.
 
Beyond the cars, the brown meadow reaches
back to trees whose stretching bodies and bare
limbs are not yet fuzzy with spring colors.
 
A flake, two, 20 drops on cheeks and hands
and hair, and the threat becomes a promise—
a light snow starts painting everything white.
 
White everywhere in service to nature,
adding to the water supply.  Asking
nothing in return.  For thirsty earth, a gift.


 For Sherry's prompt "Landscapes" at What's Going On? 


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12 comments:

  1. This poem took me to the time I first experienced snowfall...the first flakes, everything painted white...quite magical. But then I realized it is magical every single time...

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  2. I love the way you write about impending snow. You wrote "the threat becomes a promise—
    a light snow starts painting everything white." And isn't that a good feeling (if one doesn't have to drive in it)! That is what is happening here this morning. We have had an EXTEMELY snowless winter, but today is the day we will get 6 inches! I could see the thirst here, and at last nature's thirst will be quenched!

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  3. I love imagining "everything here reaches upwards as if singing "I'm thirsty!" in chorus." I adore "For thirsty earth, a gift." I love the photo showing a bit of your surroundings, and love that there is a meadow, and trees. Beautiful, Susan.

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  4. I’m not a fan of snow, which goes back to an incident when I was very little, but I love the thought of it and the way it looks – from inside! You created that powerful anticipation of snow in your poem, Susan. especially in the lines:
    ‘Pink haze darkens the sky before noon’;
    ‘The parking lot spreads out, car hoods ready’;
    and
    ‘A flake, two, 20 drops on cheeks and hands
    and hair, and the threat becomes a promise’.

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  5. You call these posts drafts but to me you've written a perfect piece here, Susan. I also love the photograph. Did you take it?

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  6. I love the pink haze - and all the other wonders of nature that can be spied - Jae

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  7. I love this part
    "White everywhere in service to nature,
    adding to the water supply. Asking
    nothing in return. For thirsty earth, a gift."

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  8. The snow looks beautiful. A gift for thirsty earth.

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  9. I love the concept of a thirsty earth. Here in Wisconsin, we pray for snow to help farmers grow in a healthier biome, as snow helps create nitrogen-rich soil. I remember a science teacher saying, "All the water we have is all the water we will never have, and all we are going to get." As it continues to redistribute, we watch carefully. Lovely.

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  10. This is excellent, Susan. I love how the poem builds to that final stanza crescendo.

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  11. I love how the contrast between waiting and receiving is woven throughout- there's a stillness in the anticipation, yet a quiet generosity in the snowfall. Beautiful!

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  12. the snow, a gift for thirsty earth. - Beautiful imagery, Susan.

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