01 November 2013

Open Door


rain grey
rain blow
rain sun
rainbow?
rain shine
no bow


Posted for Satya Robyn's event: Mindful Writing Day, today: a small stone, a meditative moment, a drop in the bucket of peace.

Re-posted at Poets United for Poetry Pantry # 174.




Copyright © 2013  S.L.Chast





15 comments:

  1. I love the "drop in the bucket of peace".

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  2. every rainbow comes with rain....some days though liht is enough...and laying down the bows...and arrows...

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    1. ah that should be light.....smiles
      happy sunday

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  3. Very clever reflection here! Love the final line.

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  4. Simple words and great imagery. Impressive. :-)
    -HA

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  5. always loving rain blows!

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  6. I love the hope in your words and the rhythm to the lines. :<)

    Thank you for the lovely comment re: Wait for Me! Made my morning.

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  7. Different meanings deciphered for one single word!! that so amazing and intelligent.

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  8. Each poetic drop is perfectly timed.

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  9. Welcome to November… beautifully expressed.

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  10. Great play on the words and images we associate with rain Susan!

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  11. love the play of rain.....

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