ATHENA, oil on linen by Sandra M. Stanton |
Under the aegis of the owl, I learned I was Athena’s child.
Mom taught me as she sheared the sheep and spun the yarn to clothe us all.
Let us start with the Greeks, she said,
though more ancient ties will emerge:
I oppose Aphrodite—she nature-born of sea foam—I tame
wilderness; I am craft and art. Born of mankind, I make cities.
Mom poured libations to creation
from porcelain pots she threw herself.
Took homespun from her mythic wheel to weave by hand into whole cloth,
Palmed in blue weft for strength, for peace and justice (strategy—not war),
Pulled red, white, black and gold for warp
of industry, design and art.
Added grey for angles of houses, for privacy at day’s end
white for eyes of God fringed in black for beauty, boldness and for depth
Testimony poured in, brightened
vanishing points above buildings.
Mother, did you make me yourself , like a basket of twisted reed?
Did you find me floating downstream like the daughter of Pharoah’s dream?
No, child, wisdom gave birth to you
as she did me through Zeus’s head.
Athena, guide me today—it is your shield that checks the rain;
Your craft shapes the pen and paper I wield along the way
where both wisdom and folly play
Copyright © 2013 S.L.Chast
Chosen for book 11/9/2013
Chosen for book 11/9/2013
The creator. The ultimate feminine. We are, aren't we?
ReplyDeleteTerrific rhyme scheme and form. I like your specific references to art... weaving, pottery, drawing.
This is so good, I loved the second stanza...
ReplyDeleteI second KIm..... Great!
This is so good...I loved the second stanza...and I second KIm... Great!
ReplyDeletenice...love how real life and myths interweave...Mother, did you make me yourself , like a basket of twisted reed?
ReplyDeleteDid you find me floating downstream like the daughter of Pharoah’s dream?....the big questions of life of where we come from and where we go.. really cool write susan
"Took homespun from her mythic wheel to weave by hand into whole cloth,
ReplyDeletePalmed in blue weft for strength, for peace and justice (strategy—not war),
Pulled red, white, black and gold for warp
of industry, design and art."
I love this whole portion!
Great tone and topic to delve into Susan. Very enjoyeable read!
Thank you so much for visiting me, my friend! ♥
I love the idea of weaving colors in the mythic wheel ~ And that last stanza brought it all together, wisdom and folly ~ We learn through time, which one is which, don't we?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words from your pen ~
Wonderful write. I'm into mythology and this is a wonderful exploration of how that impacts on our own life and story. I echo the others who have echoed your lines, there's a lot to admire and be inspired by within your poem,
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Pulled red, white, black and gold for warp of industry, design and art - Great lines and a magical poem. Flowed really well, i like this
ReplyDeleteI love the way you wove the classical, mythological into this poem and made it personal.
ReplyDeleteI have a statue of Athena on my desk, accompanied by one of an owl. :) I enjoyed the poem very much; loved the images of mother teaching daughter
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