31 January 2020

A New-Old Story



A morning in Reifel Migratory Bird Sanctuary at the mouth of the Fraser River near Richm,ond, BC - (18914083355).jpg
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I.

Childhood was a Garden of Eden
It gave me knowledge to swallow
and then spit me out into the world.
An elder now, 50 years later,          
I dwell in my adult-nurtured       
wilderness—overgrown and untamed.
I walk in my very own tangle,
seeking its center—my heart space—
a locus for wisdom to sit down.
Here waits revelation of order:
The tangle as a single rose,
each petal emerging from my own heart.
And this rose is not neglected, but
tended by a gardener who
is my own shadow and reflection.

II.

The red rose in the living room vase
is from deep within the design.
There are more on the bush for later,
And laughter releases their petals
to nurture earth through carpeting—
then rot, mulch, pressing, and potpourri.
One petal is my first poetry book
dedicated to my mother,
recording the best parts of Eden.
A second petal is blogged poetry
that touches on peace, violence,
faithfulness and protest.
A third petal, gosh—so many are
demanding  I see them.  I do:
this new Eden made whole by spirit.

III.

I am food to the earth.  And the earth
feeds me, wanting only insight,
translation and kindness in return.
Translation, compassion, and kindness
feed the petals: old friends, new friends,
and golden rules translate survival.
Is this an old story to you?  Or
are you also new?  Let’s
delight in the richness together.


 (This poem grew with some attention to 
New Tricks  at Poets United.)





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3 comments:

  1. What a fantastic poem! I love the locus for your heart to grow in widening circles. That's the work we need to do now. LOVE "what matters is the elder garden." Yes, there is much wisdom to be harvested there. I love the petals of book, blogs and seeing! Those three final stanzas lift my heart up with hope. Might you share this at Earthweal's open link, kiddo? After our painful animal poems, I think we need to read this one.

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  2. Sherry, the revision I just completed made this poem almost entirely new. It's not done yet, but here is stage two!

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  3. It gets better and better. I love stage two, but loved the first one too. This is a very reflective piece, and deep.

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