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In what world would I be a child again?
In one where children faced neither bombs nor guns,
But walked safely on streets, sea shores, and lawns.
One where tree roots, buds, and flowers grew strong
and lasted when rain and lightning came along.
One that drew smoke from only harmless fires,
One with light tones among darker colors.
Where would I bring a child to earth again?
Where children’s play was one way to learn.
Where no one was judged by how much they earned.
Where healthy meals filled pots, pans, and dishes.
Where people fulfilled each other’s wishes.
For Sumana's prompt "Child / Children" at What's Going On?
I am sure such a world will come into existence as it is said in our scriptures thoughts create our world. When more people speak like the poem a fear free world Will come into being. The poem brings so much peace Susan. My favorite lines :
ReplyDelete'...One where tree roots, buds, and flowers grew strong
and lasted when rain and lightning came along.' Growing strong and lasting is so important.
Your poem has the feeling of old classic poetry. In a sense, it is also a prayer. For the children and the earth - for life.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Rajani - this does read like a classic, and so beautifully, especially those closing wishful lines.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem. Makes me nostalgic. I think about children of today all the time and wonder what kind of world they will grow up in. It would be wonderful if children grew up in such a world as described in your poem. That would be bliss!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful A vision of a world every child needs and deserves ❤️
ReplyDeleteI love how this reads - a hope and a wish for everyone to enjoy their childhood adventures - Jae
ReplyDeleteSeria muito lindo se assim o mundo fosse! Lindo! beijos, chica
ReplyDeleteA prayer that needs listening to.
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