16 September 2026

The Guidance of Two Crows

 

source

Two crows fly over me while I sit on the 2nd floor balcony.

One after another they go, cawing, but not in answer to each other.

Instead, they seem to be squawking at me, complaining of my gab and my loitering.

“Get with it,” they seem to be saying, “You haven’t a hermit’s excuse to hold back.”

 

I admit it.  I am one of a class of people who entangle themselves in social emptiness.

We avoid vapor and dark, sleep through sunrise and sunset, and then cry at gaps in our thinking.

If only we followed the call of the wild into forests and grasses and sunsets.

If only [we] bequeathed ourselves to the dirt to grow from the grass [we] love.

 

Wait!  Time enough to die.  For now, let’s love life.  Love trees, lakes, streams, and open waters.

Let’s turn away from time wasted and attend to places and people that use time gratefully.

The words we find there will feed us and will be worthy of passing on.

The words we find there may drip away until only essential ones are left.

 

The crows call us to be hermits if we must, but to get on with it, gracefully or not.

We may think we are untranslatable, but the words will fly to those who need them.

[They] may hardly know who [we] are or what [we] mean, and we might not know either.

But we must hear the universe and trust the call.  Keep encouraged.  And hear the crows caw.

 

๐Ÿ’Ÿ๐Ÿ’Ÿ๐Ÿ’Ÿ

For Sumana's prompt "Taking Lines."  The italicized lines above are from Part 52 of Walt Whitman's Song of Myself.


My blog poems are rough drafts.
Please respect my copyright
© 2026 Susan L. Chast 


3 comments:

  1. I love this so much! And I resonate - I am, in large part, hermit. I am conscious of the hours I "waste", yet fatigue demands a lot of rest. I love the stanza about loving trees, lakes, streams and open waters. Sadly I cant get to them often enough, now that I need someone to take me. But when I get there, I breathe deep and fill my spirit. I love the crow voices in your poem, and how you heard them.

    ReplyDelete
  2. The crows are wise when they say "Get with it!" People need to enmesh themselves in the living of life and the attending to others and the nature in our midst. Yes, there is time enough to die, and dying will come soon enough; but this is the time to live. We may think that we are untranslatable, but we might be surprised when we try! We have to trust, yes, trust that when we speak (or write) our words will mean something to others and even ourselves. A fine poem, Susan!

    ReplyDelete
  3. I love your interpretation of the crow's call to get on with life and all the thoughts that rise as an after-effect of the call. It's wonderful to follow the greenery's trail; attending others as service; living life gratefully and gracefully as well. Your words flow deeply and quietly encompassing a vast space. The last stanza is spot on. And my favorite line : We may think we are untranslatable, but the words will fly to those who need them.

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for visiting my blog!