Her note--lingering in an unresolved chord,surprising her with minor keys and overtoneswhile seeking melody--is becoming a Moment.Anxiety beckons from the getaway car,
but she chooses the Moment not
the pattern of habit, tradition and fear.She faces danger, gives herself to the Moment,embraces it and finds the moment holds her too.Her eye itch could be tears of joy,
pride, discovery, and gratitude.Where they splotch her clothes, laurels grow.She thinks of playing forgotten games:
jump rope, jacks, giant steps, checkers
twenty questions, blind man's bluff
hop scotch, high water - low water
laughter and laughter and laughter
because her note holds her like a fast car on a roller coaster,
tea cup on the tilt-a-whirl,
a pocket in an overcoat.
Strapped into the mystery,she is committedto seeing it through
even though shecannot check a schedule orask how the Moment ends
Posted for Victoria's Are You Listing? dVerse Meeting the Bar.
Copyright © 2013 S.L.Chast
It's really not that dangerous.'Trust Me'
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Yes, life is a series of Moments.
ReplyDeleteha. hope you are enjoying phillie...
ReplyDeleteanxiety waits in the getaway car...cool line...
my fav though... She faces danger, gives herself to the Moment,
embraces it and finds the moment holds her too...that is very cool
this one felt different to me susan...
I like the giving in to the moments, like getting lost in music or watching that tea cup swirl ~ The format shaping reminds me of a wave in a moment's time ~
ReplyDeleteHappy and safe travels, Susan ~
smiles..i much like the car about playing the forgotten games... think i should play some of them again as well...smiles
ReplyDeleteYou included the lists with so much ease, Susan. Like Claudia, the games were most fun for me, full of memories. The capitalization of Moment works so well to emphasize the message. Enjoy your meeting.
ReplyDeleteheeding the call for a new journey! beautiful
ReplyDeleteThose forgotten games bring back so much...I like the urgency of anxiety in the getaway car, and also the safety of the pocket in the overcoat. We should all live in the Moment. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI like your list of forgotten games, and everything you did with the concept of moment.
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