10 March 2022

The Live Word

 


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To be rubbed the wrong way brings out my claws,

the dark side of my wildness.  I prefer

to purr and kneed the breast like a kitten

or overfed bobcat, but I have tooth

and nail; I hiss and snarl.  Ah! you rub me

the wrong way!  Beneath my protests—I love

having dust and dander released, seeds and

scavengers shed from skin under surface

beauty.  Sound is richer with bite added.

So yes, I rule and serve—S and M to 

the max—but my favorite moments are

when you let go and ride on me naked

and free.  You seep into me through our eyes

and touch and taste; our muscles inform each

other until we become a new beast

both tense and languid, ravenous and fed,

secure and free in danger and in lust.

No one can see us coming, no one can

predict our when, but pounce is guaranteed.

We pause, then pounce in new beats that bring

laughter and tears, that rip open the breasts

of those we meet.  And they are quite willing.

They live for thrills, provide the laps.  We curl,

double lapped and rub them the wrong way too.

What’s in a word that lives beyond carnal

dreams, that makes spirit and flesh one, that moves

the soul until earth—awakened—trembles?


earthweal weekly challenge: ANIMAL POETRY


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5 comments:

  1. This poem is a wild ride indeed. I love "Pounce is guaranteed"! This poem is very - alive! In the wildest way. Smiles.

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  2. I love the sinuous soft-footed way this rounds and joins the matter, alive and greeting and growling at every point of contact. Meeting the animal meets staying true to its terms, explaining less of it and having a good purr.

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  3. An impressive sojourn into the wild union.

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  4. I love what you have done here, Susan - the wildness you have unleashed in this poem!

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  5. The opening line set the pace for this well executed adventure to the wild side. A word to the wise be careful how you rub

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