28 April 2022

Where the Commons Is

 



In my core, I hold

an old-style public commons--

a Zócalo of the heart—

with benches, gazebo, bingo game tables,

public flower/herb/vegetable gardens,

blanket vendors of shirts/pottery/carving,

and cart venders of sweet ice, pretzels and corn on sticks—

antojito for the mouth and mind. 

 

The commons in my heart is a place known and safe.

Though common is a dull word, in its middle

nestles a comforting mo/ma of nurture

to imagine or remember or visit.

I've visited to read/converse/walk

and to join events and rallies promoted

on the internet or by word-of-mouth,

calling me out to non-computer social space.

 

And my spirit seeks out the commons

to walk in memory with ancestors,

to fly kites with pigeons and forefathers,

to race with brothers and sisters, freeing our legs

from constraint and hugging at the finish line,

sweaty and happy, to listen to mothers' and grandmothers'

circles of story and food, oral wisdom

with open invitation to participate.

 

Here we meet neighbors and refugees,

immigrants and lost relatives including trees,

plants and animals we finally recognize.

This paradise incorporates change,

death, danger, and bad weather

in an atmosphere of mutual aid, open hands,

and common awareness of safety, the sacredness

and blessing of our presence in the heart of life.

 

for earthweal weekly challenge: THE COMMONS 

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5 comments:

  1. Beautiful, Susan. We have such a gathering place in our village - the village green, where the artists' market is every Saturday and other civic events and rallies are held. I so enjoyed this poem. Have been offline today so slow to comment.

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  2. It would be amazing if there were places like that here too. We have places where people gather but mostly it's just to watch sports matches. :) Suzanne - Mapping Uncertainty

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  3. I love your message here, Susan: especially your conclusion!

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  4. Wonderful to hold this space in your heart. it is exactly what the world is hungry for.

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  5. Sorry to get by late - your point is well taken, in an online hive of isolate silos, there is such simple joy in just being out and together. For most US communities, parks and festivals resonate with the commons. Our little Florida town has many festivals through the year and there are parks with huge playgrounds, a lakeside and biking trails -- that spirit of commons is in itself exhilarating to the sequestered and scrolled. Many fine details here of celebration and shared space.

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