06 April 2026

A trickle, a stream, a river

 

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This poem is a trickle
In the vast sea of meaning
A break in the habit that dulls dawn
and puts days on automatic.
 
This poem is a stream in
and out of my soul; a gift to
us all from the liminal unlimited
source of life and breath.
 
This poem is a river
Swarming with water life
in it and on it, fishes and
spiders, dragonflies, and birds.
 
This poem holds memory
Hidden in the layers of water
From pure to polluted in our river
Of sound bites from war.
 
This poem is a reminder
That life wants to thrive and
wants us to notice, that life
Is urgent and insistent.
 
This poem is a truth
that we take life and give it,
that we owe the world our voices
rich from the surround of love.


 

For Sherry's prompt "This poem" at What's Going On? 

 

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10 comments:

  1. I really liked the way your poem flowed - like a stream, like a river, and its teaching that life wants to thrive. The last stanza is thoughtful - that we owe the world our voices from the surround of love. What a positive ending to your well-penned meaningful poem!

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  2. The journey begins as a trickle before becoming a stream and a river reaching its destination of love. But one has to pause at the memory lane and sigh before moving on. My favorite are these thought provoking lines:" This poem is a reminder/ That life wants to thrive".

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  3. This poem flows like a river of light, lifting my heart line by line. Just beautiful.

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  4. This poem is a river of truth. We owe the world our voices from a surround of love.

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  5. This poem flows with each word and the the 2nd and 3rd verse were my favorite parts of this poem.

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  6. How wonderfully your thought moves with your words - I like the sense of growth you convey - Jae

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  7. wow this poem is amazing from the beginning to the end carrying me through wisdom and beauty

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  8. This poem moves in a flow of truth and call to action

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  9. The last three stanzas really resonated for me.

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  10. This poem flowed in the direction of a stream. Beautiful, Susan!

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