26 May 2026

An unfinished journey



Did I live too much in fantasy?
I ask myself, as I downsize into
a two-room apartment, sifting through
the flotsam and jetsam of my life for
remnants to sustain me.  I am like a sea
in which boats floated, each different
in time, shape, and form, and each containing
evidence of conviction and passion. 
 
I have relics still, paintings and doves, books
and journals, wood carvings and pottery,
photographs and poetry—all of which
recall what is gone to memory.  The sea
of me is surrounded by the woods
of childhood’s imaginings and today’s forest.
In between, my ministry of teaching took
different forms. Should I tell you about each boat?    
 
Let’s focus instead on an ever deepening sea
a relationship with the larger spirit in the universe.
On peace activism and the workings of peace
that survive despite wars.  I am grateful for spirit. 
I am grateful for openings which always brought
new opportunity.  Grateful for writing to think
and thinking to write.  Grateful for friends in each boat.
Grateful for the sea that is and the ocean that will be.


For my prompt "The Journey" at What's Going On? 


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© 2026 Susan L. Chast 


9 comments:

  1. My new favourite of yours, Susan. This is beautiful. "A relationship with the larger spirit in the universe...." Wow. I have made the same downsizing journey. Still surrounded by my most favourite things that reflect the journey I have made.

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  2. I really like the idea of the boats floating, each one containing evidence of different meaningful parts of your life. I like the idea of friends in each boat and the sea that the bpats float on. A really creative journey.

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  3. How you've portrayed each part of you through beautiful images, Susan! Wonderful!
    "Let’s focus instead on an ever deepening sea—
    a relationship with the larger spirit in the universe."---A gems of words! And how I love the close! An amazing journey it is.

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  4. Wow! I loved going with you on your journey. Beautifully told. I love the image of the boats holding different eras of your life and the way you describe the sea of yourself widening into a relationship with the larger spirit in the universe.

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  5. And I am grateful that you wrote such a caring poem. Thank you.

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  6. You describe your adjustment to a different stage of life so beautifully. I like to the relationship with the sea and with your writing - Jae (also lovely view out of your window)

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  7. A testament to a life well lived...Rall

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  8. This is amazing, Susan! I love:

    "The sea
    of me is surrounded by the woods
    of childhood’s imaginings and today’s forest."

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