28 January 2022

Make Haste Slowly



A female of Mute Swan carrying three of her six cygnets on her back.
Photo by 
Fabbbio

Four white swans paddle toward me, the one in advance called back by cautious brothers. 

She is the smaller of the four, intent on exploring, on following wonder—

most curious about black swans she sees guarding their cygnets across the marshland.

My rowboat forms the scene’s triangle edge. I drift, oars dropped.  Swans take my breath away.

These—young and old, black and white—double thrill me, and transport me to fantasy:

Am I in New South Wales, where black swans live? Am I in front of the Swan Lake ballet?

I am black swan, transformed into a trap though innocent beauty glows from my brow.

I am white swan, human in a villain's spell, yet I want to stay here, fixed and unfixed.

Here is retreat on un-iced salt water in a snow globe, a live backbone of sorts.

Restoration—if  not resurrection—rejuvenation, though I still grow old.

From here, I give everything—all prayer, all money, all space, all power, all health.

Surprise me daily, and see how I write.  Surprise me into life, slowly. Make haste.


A ride for two!  (2020)
Photo by Geoff McKay 
from Palmerston North, New Zealand


Written for earthweal weekly challenge: THE SWAN 


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2 comments:

  1. Such a beautiful poem, Susan. Being Swan....drifting....."Surprise me into life....Make haste." Wonderful!

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  2. Aaah...The last line! It's always wonderful to come face to face with breath taking moments. Beautiful.

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